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Jan. 14th, 2010

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Just a few more days...

...ok, actually a full week worth of workdays...

...I shouldn't dread work this much.  I used to take work by the week, not the day.  A little bit of time off once this debacle is over with will do me some good.

I would be working on that novel more, but this job just leaves me so damn drained at the end of the day.  I've fallen asleep on the couch for the first time in well...ever.  And I get to spend the last three days training my replacement (I'll need one, tops), which should be so fun.  Can't even warn him of the crap I had to put up with..."Yeah, by the way, even if you do the job perfectly, they'll still keep complaining to your manager if they don't like you."  Weekly meetings of "You're doing the job great, but they just don't like you" gets real old...never thought I'd look forward to unemployment, maybe then I'll get something done...like dropping the 20 pounds or so I seem to have gained...

...but that's enough of that.

I figure that in a solid week I can have the draft back up to where it was, but that means a whole week, not just the evenings when I get home from work.  Things seem to fit better now.  There are a couple things that have started to develop in certain scenes that seem innocuous at first, but now are pretty forboding if you know what to look for.

Or how I think...but that's another story.

Dec. 29th, 2009

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*wanders in with a feather-duster*

Ooohhhh...damn...now this place hasn't seen a good cleaning in a while...

Haven't felt much like putting anything up, things are just so weird now.

Well, that's a lie, really, life is pretty much normal, I'm just lazy...or something.  I don't know.  I guess this is where I complain about everything that's changed in the past two months...

...fine, let's get this over with...

Obligatory Playground reference:  if it weren't for the fact that I rely on that place to get me through the day at work (don't look at me like that, I get my work done), I can't say how much I'd actually be on.  But then, I've said that before, haven't I?  With my brother gone, things seem a tad dull...but then, that could be just me again.

In recent memory, Dragon Age:  Origins has been pretty much consuming both my and Lady Meyers' souls.  It's that good.  It got an old, jaded gamer like me (though, admittedly, I'd been watching it since it's release) and a conservative gamer like her to take notice and actually buy the game (the last time that happened was KoTOR 2, though that was all her, really).  It doesn't help that Alistair is so much like my brother that it's scary.  Some of the dialogues between him and the PC are almost like exchanges we've had (or things I would do to him...)

Golem:  Quick, give me an order!
PC:  Fine, go hug Alistair.
Alistair: HEY!

On the upside, the storyline's sucked me in enough that I'm imaging scenes in my head again, even if it is just scenes from the game if I had the kind of control I'd want.  But I won't get into that, it's good that I'm in that kind of mood again, but the circumstances just leave me feeling slightly silly...

...actually, exceptionally silly.  On the one hand, the creative juices are flowing again (well, sort of), on the other, it's a bloody video game, improving scenes in my head is putting way too much effort and concentration into a simple game unless I'm the one writing the script...it feels slightly childish.

Moving on...

First Midwest Meetup happened in November, went off well, I think.  Finally broke down and I'll be acquiring Rock Band 2 over the course of the next few months...especially now that the Wii version is finally getting DLC songs, or so I've read.  Which means that we've finally got a wireless router for the house and our Wii is online (with the added bonus of being able to get online whenever one of us is on a Dragon Age/Mass Effect bender and taking up the desktop...)

On to the part this thing was supposed to be about, the novel.

It still exists...that's about all that could be said for it.  I've gone through the old draft and highlighted what's going to need to be changed for the re-write, but I've said all this before.  It's just a matter of actually sitting down and working through it.  I think it would be easier if I actually had a space of my own in this bloody house, but the only room left is the living room which has no furniture in it aside from the Christmas tree that never got decorated.  I guess I'll just have to slum it and sit at the kitchen table in my sleepwear again like I used to in the old apartment.  Now if only I had toquitos and an abundance of liquor...

Oct. 28th, 2009

The damage

Well, just finished skimming through to see what's likely to need rewritten in this new direction I want to take the novel, and the results aren't pretty.

I'm looking at rewriting, in some way, pretty much over 2/3 of the current narrative.  I might as well be back at Square One.  Basically I'm going to have to start from scratch and then put in the salvagable bits as they come up.

It's going to be a long trip to getting this thing done...

Oct. 13th, 2009

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Starting to think I might be slightly manic...or bi-polar, or whatever the proper term is.  The only way to describe my mood currently is up.  But it's more of a self-destructive silly kind of up than an actual happy, and I'm fully aware that in about a week I'll probably cycle back to my usual moroseness.

But until then I'll probably troll various topics in the Playground for the hell of it and then revel in the chaos.

oh wait, already did that...

...twice.

Last day of work is Friday.  Missing work on last Tuesday cost me my only shot at having a job before then, so I'm probably going to have quite a bit of time on my hands for a few weeks.  The upside is that my mind has found itself wandering back to the Fears novel and how to improve it, this is a good sign.  Sadly, it looks like Mr Sawyer is on his way to being written out, which is a real shame because I really liked him and DemonicAngel really helped give him some much needed personality.  Though I won't divulge any other secrets.  Why?  That is...

...a sec-ret...

Yup, definitely slightly manic...

Sep. 14th, 2009

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Felt like indulging my curiosity and doing something I hadn't done in a while:

Word Count (narrative):  71537 words
Word Count (total):  77876

The narrative was 61830 in late March, so in about 6.5 months I've written less than 10K words.

Consider that those 61830 words were written in the space of just over twice that amount of time...

If I knew how to get that drive back, I'd do it, believe me, but I just don't know how...

Sep. 13th, 2009

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Well, with the start of Fears 3 (damn you brother...) it also kicks of the re-re-re-re (or something like that) diving back into trying to finish that god-be-damned novel.  I've got no drive, no time, and absolutely none of that creative spark that I usually have...

...hit it.

With any luck I'll at least have a working draft by November, since I'm planning on doing NaNo again, only this time I'm going to try and turn Dark Moon Rising into the novel it was meant to be.

Aug. 25th, 2009

The future is written not in stone, but in sand.

Bet you were expecting something deep, philosophical, or just plain masturbatory after an opening like that, yeah?

Well, it's not (well, the first two, anyway...)

I don't want to say I feel better about taking Fears up again, but I don't feel quite like I did last time.  I still haven't done any work on it (meanwhile I've logged in about 5 more hours into Okami...), and probably won't for a while, but I'm no longer on the verge of deleting the draft so I don't have to look at it anymore.  The Fallout thing, on the other hand...I think that was just a passing fancy.  Can't seem to work up the desire to work on it at all.

...this is probably for the better.  Though I imagine if I put Fallout 3 back in or snagged a copy of the Fallout Trilogy that would change and I'd be all ready to tackle it again.  Though I swore that I wouldn't get any new games until I've finished some of the backlog.  Considering that backlog consists of the rest of Okami and the entirety of Baten Kaitos and Tales of Symphonia I figure that means I won't be getting any new games until November at the least...

...just in time for my birthday.

I wanted to write something about finding inspiration in stressful and busy times, but as it turns out, finding said inspiration during stressful times is really, really hard.  I just don't want to even think when I get home, and that's even when I can count on having some time to myself when I get home and not have to deal with the multitudes of problems that just keep coming up:  like replacing the sliding glass doors to the backyard (something I had thought  was being put off until next year...but that's another rant), the window guys arriving 2 and a half hours late and eating up the entire day (is there some sort of unwritten rule of contractors that say they will never be on time?), finding out my father is likely to be laid off, other things that I'm trying to not mention, and the overall regular stresses that combine to make both inhabitants of this house about as cuddly and affectionate as a pair of wet cats.

It's hard to even work up the desire to actually sit down and work with all that going on.  I look at the page and just go "words...ugh..." and shut down.  There has to be a way to actually find desire to get something done.

I figure that I'll open up requests to read and give feedback on the draft thus far again.  Same request as last time, I actually want some kind of feedback and not just "is good."  I need something I can actually work with.  And be warned, the draft is over 120 pages in Word currently, probably more.

Aug. 18th, 2009

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So, sometime between getting home, getting into the shower, eating, and getting some errands done before sitting down to try and write some when I finally asked myself:  what the hell am I getting out of this?

If there's one thing I strive to not do, because I hate it when people do it, it's lie to myself.  I feel as though I've been lying to myself for probably, oh, the past 2 or 3 months at least that this whole damn book thing is really worth my time.  It's not going anywhere, I'm not accomplishing anything other than sitting in front of a computer typing for hours on end, and it's not as though I'm good enough to even be noticed, much less actually signed on and published.  I look at the screen and I feel pretty close to the same way I did in my last few Mafia games:  Is this really rewarding?  What am I even doing this for?

Maybe I'll feel different in a few days, but I doubt it.  I've already seen that I can go for months without even thinking about the damn thing, it's more likely that time will go by and I'll just forget.

Aug. 13th, 2009

Fallout-Welcome to the Wasteland

gah...big ass Evony ad right there...kinda distracting...really wish I could do something about those...so I'll make this quick, if only to get away from the idiocy...

Was going to have at least the opening of the fallout-fic I mentioned a few posts ago up last weekend.  That didn't work, but I have some freetime until this weekend when I'm devoting most of it to Fears, so I wrote up what I guess would be a prologue.  Just like how Dark Moon Rising and its sequel were tagged, this one will be tagged under "fallout."

Anyway, without further ado:


Welcome to the Wasteland.

War. War never changes. Since the dawn of human kind, when our ancestors first discovered the killing power of rock and bone, blood has been spilled in the name of everything, from God to justice to simple, psychotic rage.

In the year 2077, after millennia of armed conflict, the destructive nature of man could sustain itself no longer. The world was plunged into an abyss of nuclear fire and radiation. But it was not, as some had predicted, the end of the world. Instead, the apocalypse was simply the prologue to another bloody chapter of human history. For man had succeeded in destroying the world - but war, war never changes.

In the early days, thousands were spared the horrors of the holocaust by taking refuge in enormous underground shelters, known as vaults. But when they emerged, they had only the hell of the wastes to greet them - all except those in Vault 101. For on the fateful day, when fire rained from the sky, the giant steel door of Vault 101 slid closed... and never reopened. It was here you were born. It is here you will die. Because, in Vault 101: no one ever enters and no one ever leaves.

--

 

For the first time in what was supposed to be centuries, great gears are grinding to life.  A massive door, a Vault door, is opening to allow a single person escape into the Capital Wasteland.  Without looking back, she runs through the massive portal and into the sunlight that, until now, had only been a story.

 

Shielding her eyes from the harsh glare of the sun, she stands on a cliff as the massive door of Vault 101, her former home, screeches and seals shut, locking her out.  Unfazed by the harried escape, the blood on her hands, or the vastness of the Waste stretched out before her, she takes the first step in what will be a long, long journey.

 

--

 

A newcomer breathes in the fresh (at least, fresh compared to the air of the Pitt) air of the Capital Wasteland for the first time.  She is tired and battered, but can’t stop.  The slavers and Raiders wouldn’t be far behind.  The Pitt was in chaos, and that was how she’d made good her escape.  She was a slave no more.

 

Keeping to the shadows, ears open to hear any sound, she creeps along the hills and rocks.  She needed clothing, weapons, shelter, a number of things, but they would all come in time.  She had survived a year in the Pitt, she could survive in this wasteland.  However, the hardships she experienced in the Pitt would be nothing compared to the journey she would go through here.

 

--

 

An AER9 Laser Rifle, an unusual find in the wastes, to be sure.  They were an older model, but supposedly much more reliable than the newer models.  Smiling, the scavenger tests the weapon’s heft.  It was still in relatively good shape, at least structurally.  It would take further testing and tinkering to see if the internal components would need replaced or repaired…too bad he didn’t have any of the microfusion cells required to fire the weapon.

 

The sound of metallic feet stopped the scavenger’s focus on the rifle and brought them back to his surroundings.  Scavenging high tech was lucrative, but it was also very dangerous.  Security robots were everywhere, and most shot first before asking questions.  He quickly exited through the back door of the shack, accelerating into a sprint as the first laser bolts streaked by.  There would be other expeditions, other finds, but not today.  Today was the day his life began to take a new turn.

--

 

War never changes, but the participants do.  The fighters, the warriors, change from era to era.  In the Capital Wasteland, the new fighters were gathering, the pieces were in place, and a new war was about to break.  Battles would be fought, lives lost, and dreams would be realized…or crushed.  The harsh reality of the Wasteland is that Good doesn’t always triumph, Evil isn’t always held in check, and sometimes the brave few that stand and fight are simply gunned down.  Welcome to the Wasteland.

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Aug. 8th, 2009

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Okaaaayyy...so much for getting any real work done on anything writing related this weekend...

Sale on hardwood laminate flooring means it's time to get rid of the hideous 70's peel-and-stick tile that covers nearly half the house.  Guess who get's to be primary tile-remover-and-laminate-layer?  Did I mention that the first peel-and-stick tiles weren't designed to come off the floor?

As if that weren't enough, we discovered that in front of the front door the floorboard is rotted about an inch inside, possibly the joyce beneath it too.  Lucky it's a raised step, so it isn't the actual floor.  But it still means I get to play around with power tools...cutting, maiming, killing power tools and cut out what's rotted...

...with any luck I'll only lose a pinky or two...

Made some progress, finally hit one of the major scenes that I've had written since the beginning.  Poor Alicia...all the build-up just kept piling it on.  It's almost unrealistic.  Now that I'm pretty much done with Fallout 3 for the time being I should be able to actually force myself to work...

...right up until I remember that I'm still only about halfway through Okami...with Baten Kaitos and Tales of Symphonia waiting in the wings...

...and three new games and one expanison on my hit list...

...

...if only Willpower hadn't of been my dump stat...

Aug. 3rd, 2009

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...and the finale:

--

            Ep 19-Tipping the Scales

 

            “I think I’ll try to kill you right where DeCallo died…” Dirk said as he slowly stepped forward, “It seems most appropriate.”  The hum intensified, Mordokai’s teeth were actually buzzing in his head.  “You two were so alike, truly two sides of the same coin.”

 

            Mordokai wasn’t listening.  The longer Dirk talked, the more time Mordokai had to steel himself, to look for weaknesses.  He had to find something to exploit, because if the tales he had heard about the Others and their abilities were true then Mordokai was going to need everything he had to survive this.

 

            “My guard is down, Mordokai.  Why not strike?”

 

            The words jarred Mordokai.  Dirk’s entire left side was open to attack, a skilled swordsman could have ended this fight before it even started with a single blow.  It had to be a trick, no trained fighter would leave themselves so open, but Dirk made no move to close the gap in his defense.

 

            “Come now, make your attack.”  Dirk’s voice was mocking him.  “Revenge is just a single swing away…”

           

            Mordokai assumed a defensive stance:  sword pointed downwards at an angle, the Iron Door.  He would not be lured in by Dirk’s false carelessness.

 

            Dirk smiled slightly.  “If that’s the way you want it.”  That snake-like grace Mordokai had observed in Dirk’s walk manifested fully in his attack.  The man moved like lightning.  Mordokai barely had time to bring his sword up, just barely keeping Dirk’s sword from taking his head.  The force of the blow sent a shock up Mordokai’s arms, shaking them to the bone.  “You won’t find me as easy to defeat as DeCallo was…”

 

            Mordokai’s shoulder twinged at that.  It was the one positive thing he had to say about the late bard, the boy had known how to fight.  Mordokai pushed back and managed to escape Dirk’s reach, reassuming the Iron Door.  Dirk’s stance never changed, his left side was still wide open.

 

            Dirk lashed out again.  A flurry of slices and cuts:  head, arms, legs, torso.  Each one coming at Mordokai with a speed that he had never seen.  He managed to parry or block them all.  Each blow struck his blade like a hammer.  By the end of it, Mordokai’s arms were tingling from the shock.

 

            “Your guard is dropping Mordokai…”

 

            The words warned him, but not quickly enough.  Dirk’s blade raked across his left side, just enough to cut into the skin and bring forth blood.  Mordokai gritted his teeth and brought his blade around in a counterstrike:  a diagonal cut, right to left.  Dirk deflected it effortlessly, sending Mordokai off-balance.  He stumbled forward a single step.

 

            “Too slow, Mordokai…”

 

            Another small cut across Mordokai’s back.  Dirk was tormenting him, that much was plain.  Both times he could’ve easily killed Mordokai, but instead he’d only chosen to draw blood.  He was playing with Mordokai.  Mordokai spun around, sword at the ready.  Dirk was again mocking him with that opening.

 

            “Take the opportunity, Mordokai.  Drive the sword into my side…just like you did DeCallo…”

 

            No, he wouldn’t.  It was a trick, Mordokai knew it.  He again assumed the Iron Door stance.  Dirk let out a long-suffering sigh.

 

            “Such a fool.”

 

            Quicker than Mordokai could blink, Dirk let loose with an overhead slash.  Mordokai brought his blade up to parry the attack, but the power behind it was too much.  He stopped the blow just shy of his own head, but the shock jarred his arms and shoulders, weakening his defense.  With a single push, he pushed Dirk’s blade away from his body, but his sword slipped from numbed hands as he did so.  The sword skittered across the stone floor, this time it was well out of his reach.

 

            Dirk circled Mordokai like a cat.  “So foolish, so brash, you’ve no idea what you’re doing, do you?”  Mordokai’s eyes never left Dirk.  He was constantly moving to keep Dirk in front of him, waiting for Dirk to strike.  He’d only get one chance at this.  Mordokai fingered the knife, Mi’ir’s knife, sheathed at his back…

 

            Dirk laughed.  “Sir Mordokai, always dependable, always predictable…”  He drew the sword back slowly.  “Now you see what the Heraldic Order gets you.”

 

            Mordokai gripped the knife.

 

            “You’ve performed your part admirably.  Now die, like you should’ve done four years ago.”  Dirk lunged forward, stabbing towards Mordokai’s heart like a bolt of lightning.  Mordokai had a split second to react.  He brought DeCallo’s knife out from its sheath and side-stepped.  Dirk’s stance brought his stab high, almost too high, his left flank was open.  Mordokai ducked low, to dodge Dirk’s blade, and brought the knife inwards, towards Dirk’s side.  Towards the space between the hipbone and the ribcage.

 

            Dirk’s blade went by Mordokai’s shoulder, just barely.  The blade traced along his shoulder, drawing a crimson red line from front to back.  But Mordokai made a solid hit.  Mi’ir’s knife cut deep into Dirk’s flank, slashing through muscle and laying open flesh.  Dirk let out a pained grunt as Mordokai stepped past.  Mordokai pivoted on his foot, turning to face Dirk and deliver another blow, but Dirk was no longer standing.

 

            Dirk lay against the pillar, bleeding from his side.  He did not move, did not speak, only stared at Mordokai, venom plain to see in his eyes.  Slowly, Mordokai stalked over and picked up his sword.  “I’ve waited for this.”  Dirk didn’t respond.  He tried to pick up his sword, but Mordokai rushed over and kicked it away.  “No,” he said coldly, “You won’t rob me of this.”

 

            “Then end this,” Dirk hissed.

 

            Mordokai flashed back to four years before, in this very place.

 

            “End it, paladin, grant me the oblivion I seek…”

 

            He had been unsure then, unsure of what to do.  But now, this time, with his enemy at his mercy, he felt no need to hesitate.  There was no debate.  This was what he wanted:  revenge.  Bloody, cold revenge.  He planted his foot in Dirk’s stomach, pinning him to the pillar.  Wincing at the pain in his wounded shoulder Mordokai drew his sword back.

 

            “DO IT!”

 

            “End it, paladin!”

 

            For a moment, everything froze.  Mordokai was no longer staring at Dirk, instead he saw Mi’ir lying there, bleeding from the mortal wound Mordokai had dealt him.  He remembered Mi’ir’s spiteful laugh. 

 

            “You can’t do it…can you?  You have me at your mercy…defeated…but you can’t kill me…” Mi’ir laughed weakly, “That…that’s why you won’t win…you’re just…too…good.  You would have to become like me to win in the end…and you won’t pay that price…”

 

            He’d paid that price, paid it willingly.

 

            …and what has it brought you?  A voice whispered.  Pain?  Despair?

 

            No.  It had brought him power, revenge…

 

            …at what cost?

 

            Mordokai remembered one more thing, one more detail from that day, four years ago…

 

            “End it, paladin!”  It was almost as if Mi’ir was pleading, as if even beneath that smugness he wanted to die.

 

            Mi’ir had sought death, and it had wrought four years of chaos.  Now, as he stared into Dirk’s eyes, the poison contained within staring back at him, he could see what was happening.  Dirk’s death would only bring more chaos, tip the Balance further in the favor of the Dark Moon, just as Mi’ir’s had.  Just as the Dead Queen’s had.  They had snared him in the exact same trap as they had four years ago.  Either he died at Dirk’s hands and thus a powerful enemy was dead, or Dirk was killed and the power vacuum would create more chaos, tipping the Balance further.

 

            …now you understand…  the voice faded from Mordokai’s mind.  Into the absence it left behind, guilt flooded.  Four years, four years of dancing to the strings of the Dark Moon, no longer dancing unknowingly, but dancing willingly.

 

            He could hear Mi’ir’s mocking laughter ringing in his ears.

--

 

Ep 20-Breaking

 

            “No.”

 

            “What?”  Dirk spat.

 

            “I will no longer be your fool.”  Mordokai lowered his sword.  “I am done, you are defeated.  I will not be a fool to your games, Dark Moon.”  He stepped backwards.  “I will not kill you.”

 

            “You are a fool!” Dirk spat caustically, “We will hunt you wherever you go!  You will never be safe!”

 

            “I’ve defeated you once.  I will do so again.”  It was over, he was done.  Every death he’d dealt the Order of the Dark Moon had only created more chaos.  He was done dancing to their tune.

 

            A battered and bloodied Serpentine appeared in the doorway.  “Mordokai!”

 

            Mordokai turned his head, legitimately glad to see the young woman.  A smile that Serpentine hadn’t seen in many years crossed Mordokai’s features, a smile that said plain as day that Mordokai had made a turn, that he was coming back.  But any joy Serpentine had at seeing Mordokai this way soon dissolved away as she watched Dirk rise up behind him.

 

            “Mordokai!”

 

            Mordokai turned, knife in the air, but not quickly enough.  Dirk’s sword pierced Mordokai’s stomach.  But Dirk’s triumph was short lived, Mordokai drove Mi’ir’s knife into the side of Dirk’s throat.  Dirk’s eyes never lost their venom, their hate, even as they lost all light, all life, and he fell to the ground, dead.

 

            “Mordokai!”  Serpentine limped  forward as fast as she could manage as Mordokai fell to the ground.  By the time she reached him his breathing had become shallow, his skin was losing color.  He lay in a pool of thick, nearly black blood.

 

            “No longer theirs…” he whispered, “I’m no longer theirs…”

 

            Frantically Serpentine tore at Mordokai’s clothes, trying to expose the wound.  If she had enough strength left, enough power…

 

            …no use.  She could see the wound now:  deep, angry, thick blood flowed freely.  It was beyond her ability, even if she were at full strength.  “I can’t…I can’t save you…”

 

            Mordokai only smiled.  “No longer theirs…”

 

            Those last words escaped Mordokai’s bloodied lips, and he breathed his last.

--

            Ep 21 - Choice

 

            “Been a long time, handsome.”

 

            Mordokai’s eyes fluttered open.  That voice…was familiar.  He’d expected pain, blood, but he found none.  He glanced around, expecting to see the stones of the Dead Queen’s keep, but saw nothing.

 

            “Over here, paladin.”

 

            Only one person ever called him that.  Oh Helena, I’m in hell Mordokai pushed himself up, onto his feet, and turned around.

 

            Mi’ir DeCallo stood behind him, just as Mordokai remembered him:  fair, almost feminine features, long dark hair, and that smug smile… “Still as handsome as ever.”

 

            “This…this isn’t possible.  Your soul was destroyed when you died…” Mordokai said, unbelieving.

 

            “I don’t make the rules, paladin,” Mi’ir shrugged

 

            “Oblivion not to your liking?” Mordokai asked.

 

            Mi’ir sighed sadly, a sound that Mordokai had never actually heard before.  “Oblivion would’ve suited me just fine, paladin, but someone else got to me first.”

 

            Mordokai’s eyebrow raised.  “Oh?”  He looked down, not wanting to meet the bard’s eyes.  There was something in them, something he’d never seen before, made him uneasy.

 

            “Made me an offer.  It’s why I’m here, paladin…”  Mordokai looked up, met Mi’ir’s eyes.  “You’re dead.  I could show you, if you like.”

 

            Mordokai shook his head, there was no need to see it.  “No.  I’ve reaped what I’ve sown.  It’s a fitting end.”

 

            Mi’ir walked forward, setting a hand on Mordokai’s shoulder.  “And that’s why I’m here.  It doesn’t have to end, not quite.”

 

            “Out with it, Mi’ir.”

 

            Mi’ir turned his back to Mordokai.  “You get a choice, just like I did.”

 

            “A choice?”

 

            “You can choose to live.  A chance to redeem yourself fully.”

 

            Mordokai snorted.  “I don’t deserve that.”

 

            “That’s the other choice,” Mi’ir looked down, “Me.”

 

            “You’re Death now?” Mordokai chuckled despite himself.  “Excuse me if an eternity with you isn’t much of a choice.”

 

            “I’m more like an agent.”  Mi’ir smiled slightly, “Your past mistake offering you a chance to right the wrongs.”  He brushed a lock of hair from his face.  “But I appreciate the…undertones.”

 

            “What happens if I choose to go back?”

 

            Mi’ir shook his head.  “Service.  Fixing the wrongs that stemmed from your mistakes.”

 

            “Going with you?”

 

            “Judgment.  You go before Her, right now, as you are.  Maybe you’ve done enough, maybe not.”  Mi’ir paused, “You’ve got all the time you need.  Paladin…”

 

            “Yes?”

 

            “I think you should go back.”

 

            “Mi’ir DeCallo, growing a heart?  A conscience?”

 

            Mi’ir paused again.  “When you have to face…I…Just make your choice.” he said shortly, “I imagine it can’t be easy…”

 

            “No…no it’s not” Mordokai said smugly.  Judgment or service.  He deserved to be judged, to pay for everything he’d caused, but a chance to maybe right it all…Thoughts swirled in his head.  He had no idea how much time passed.  “Mi’ir?”

 

            Mi’ir smiled knowingly, “Goodbye…Mordokai.”

 

            Back in the physical, Mordokai drew a sudden surprised breath.

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            Epilogue

 

            Her tale finished, the elderly mage smiled and stood up, stretching her back.  She wasn‘t that old, really, she just liked making a show of it.  One of the benefits of age.  “And that’s all there is to tell, I’m afraid.”

 

            The crowd she had gathered with her story:  children, acolytes and initiates of the Heraldic Order, Justicars, Hospitaliers, and, of course, Redeemers still stared in attention.  The tale of Paladin Mordokai’s fall and redemption always did gather a crowd.  A life worthy of bardic tales, she thought sardonically.  A child stood up.  The mage smiled, it was always the children that asked, even in the stories.  “What happened to Paladin Mordokai?”

 

            Hearing Mordokai’s name said with the honorific that he had once been stripped from him brought another smile to the mage’s face.  “History essentially lost track of him after his battle with Dirk.  None of his things were recovered from the keep and he never returned to the Order.  He just…disappeared.  Some people say that he went beyond the frontier and lived out the rest of his days in peace, beyond the reach of the Dark Moon and it’s machinations.  Others say that agents of the Dark Moon caught him and killed him shortly after, no one really knows.”

 

            A paladin from the back of the Great Hall spoke up, the mage could barely make out his features.  “What about you?  What do you think, Lady Serpentine?”

 

            Serpentine focused on the source of the voice.  With his blonde hair he was hard to miss in the crowd.  “I don’t know for sure.  But there are people out there, mystics and warriors alike, that seem to exist outside the Balance.  I think that, maybe, he became one of them.”  A chuckle spread through the crowd.  “Oh, I see, everyone laugh at the senile old woman.”  She shared in the laugh, “Go on, I’m sure you’ve all got duties to attend to!”

 

            The crowd dispersed slowly, everyone except the blonde-haired paladin.  “It’s been some time, Serpentine.”  He said with a smile on his face, “You still look like you did fifty years ago.”

 

            “Why do you always say that?  Just because you only age a year for every twenty…  It never actually makes any sense, you know.  You, on the other hand, still look like that storybook knight.”  Serpentine took the paladin by the hand and held it tight.  “It’s good to see you again, Mordokai.”

 

            “It’s more like a year for every fifty.”  Mordokai chuckled.  “Koorli sends her regards.”

 

            “Of course, of course.  What brings you out here this time?  More trouble out in the provinces?”

 

            Mordokai turned a tad somber.  “No, nothing so serious.  Serpentine…my contract is up.  I’m going to be leaving.  Permanently.”

 

            Serpentine let out a sad sigh.  She’d known this day was coming.  Mordokai didn’t have the same type of agreement those like Koorli or the other Sages had.  His was a contract of redemption, not vigilance, and his time was nearly up.  “How much longer?”

 

            “She’s given me until sunrise tomorrow.  Then…”

 

            Serpentine knew exactly what would happen next.  Mordokai’s soul would leave this world to face final judgment at sunrise.  “Judgment.  Worried?” 

 

            Mordokai’s somber expression turned into a small smile.  That matter-of-fact smile that he always had when he was about to say something that, to him, was the simplest thing in the world.  “Actually…no.  I’ve done what I can, everything else is up to Her.”

 

            Serpentine gave his hand another squeeze.  “Care to watch the sun rise with an old friend?”

 

            “I’d love to.”



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Ep 13-Like Old Times

 

There was a slight sting as the blade started to cut into the flesh of her throat, drawing a bit of blood.  Serpentine’s hand snuck along the ground and grabbed the man holding her hair by the foot.  The slight look of shock on her face melted into a dark smile.  “Whenever you are…”

 

The man screamed in pain as Serpentine’s magic shattered the bones in his foot and lower leg.  His leg effectively destroyed, he collapsed in a heap behind her.  By the time the apparent leader was shouting for the others to kill them both Mordokai was already on top of one of the others, killing him quickly and leaving only two.  The leader ran forward to attack Serpentine.  She sidestepped his stab, but he was too quick for her to grab his wrist.  He hopped back quickly out of her reach, keeping the sword in front of him to keep her at bay.  A quick glance showed that Mordokai was keeping the last one busy, it was just Serpentine and the leader.  Unfortunately, she was also unarmed, putting her at a major disadvantage.  Getting close enough to touch him would put her at risk of getting cut, but standing back would only she would have to continually dodge his attacks.

 

Serpentine didn’t have long to wait before the next attack:  a wide slash that could’ve cut her in two at the waist.  She jumped backwards, just out of reach of the cut.  The next cut came immediately and would’ve crushed her collarbone if she hadn’t ducked inside the cut.  Serpentine reached out to grab her attacker, but he recovered into a stabbing stance:  sword point outward with the blade at eye level.  Serpentine threw herself to one side just in time to avoid being stabbed directly in the face.  She threw herself off-balance and rolled on the ground to break her fall.  Serpentine looked up just in time to see the sword streaking towards her head.  Not thinking, she threw herself forward, into her attacker, tackling him.  The two fought for several moments, becoming a jumble of arms, hands, and feet.

 

Somewhere in the melee Serpentine managed to get both hands on her opponent’s head.  It was all the contact she needed to work something simple.  Living beings tended to resist being changed by shaping magic, really drastic changes would require prolonged contact, but other changes like causing a bone to break or, say…

 

…closing someone’s nostrils and mouth permanently…

 

…only required a few moments.  The look of quiet confidence melted from her attacker’s face as he realized that he couldn’t breathe.  His moment of shock was more than enough time for Serpentine to sweep his feet out from under him.  She snatched up his sword and walked away, leaving him to his fate.

 

Mordokai stood on his own, watching with a smile on his face.  The last living member of the shadowdancer group was at his feet.  “Did you get what you came for?” she asked coldly.

 

Mordokai nodded.  “All the information I need.”  He looked down at the survivor, “What do we do with this?”

 

Serpentine gripped the sword nervously.  “He’ll never walk again.”  She knew what was going to happen next.  “I don’t kill prisoners.”

 

“No, but I do.”  Mordokai put his sword through the survivor’s chest.  “Probably more merciful.”  He withdrew the sword.  “Well?”

 

“Well what?”

 

“No condemnations?  No outbursts of righteous rage?”  He shifted his stance a little.  “We could finish what we started right here.”

 

Serpentine met Mordokai’s stare.  She could feel a few drops of blood running down her neck from the cut there.  “You could’ve killed me earlier, but you didn’t.”

 

“No.”  Mordokai smiled darkly.

 

“Why?”

 

“Three on one isn’t very good odds.” Mordokai said simply.  He put his sword away.  “I’ll need to stop in Balen for supplies.  We can either settle this here, now, or you can leave there and we’ll settle it later, after I’ve beheaded the Dark Moon.”

 

“You’re not getting rid of me, Mordokai.”

 

“Just like old times.” Mordokai smirked.

 

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Ep 14-Currents

 

Balen reared up in front of Serpentine and Mordokai.  It had been a long trip, but they’d made it without coming to blows.  They passed under the gates and into the city proper.  “Last chance,” Mordokai said, “or are you starting to enjoy being around me?”

 

“I could bring the entire Temple here down on you in a second.” Serpentine said coldly, “Give me one reason why I shouldn’t.”

 

“Because you want the head of the Dark Moon as much as I do.  You’re the one that bargained with me.  Without me, you don’t get that chance.”

 

Serpentine was quiet for a moment.  Mordokai was right, she couldn‘t pass up this opportunity, even though she should.  If everything worked out, she could take the head off the Dark Moon and bring Mordokai before the Elders.  “Once this is over, I’ll be bringing you before the Elders.”

 

Mordokai laughed.  “You’re welcome to try.”

 

They wove their way through the city, gathering supplies for the journey.  It wouldn’t be the first time they’d made this trip.  They were going back to where it had ended, back to the Dead Queen’s keep.

 

“I’ll be seeing the Elders one way or another, Serpentine, don’t you worry about that.”  Mordokai said, “Get some sleep, Serpentine.  There’s no stopping once we leave.”  Mordokai walked off, alone, into the crowd.  Serpentine looked around, considering her next course of action.  Mordokai was here, essentially in their grasp.  A single word to the Temple and there was little chance he would escape.

 

But…

 

…the Dark Moon.  The Elders would never move on the word of Mordokai alone, and even if they did they’d never move fast enough.  The Dark Moon had to know that they’d been compromised.  If they didn’t move now, they’d miss this chance.  Duty demanded that she report in, bring Mordokai before the Elders, but it also demanded that she hunt out the Dark Moon and other threats.

 

You’re an idiot, Serpentine, she mocked herself.  She was stuck in a current and quickly being swept along with no chance of stopping until she reached the end.  She just wasn’t sure she’d like what she found at the end.

 

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Ep 15-History Repeated

 

“They’re coming, lord” a voice hissed, “They’re in Balen now.”

 

They?” came the reply, “As in, more than just Mordokai?”

 

“The Justicar is with him.  She intends to follow him here, then capture him once you have been defeated.”

 

“She is ambitious, just like her mentor was.  Mordokai would have done the same thing.”

 

“Is she going to be a problem, lord?”

 

“This was not unplanned.  I trust you can handle her once they arrive.”

 

A smile, “She will not best me again.”

 

Dirk smiled from his seat on the Dead Queen’s former throne.  “Good.”

 

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Ep 16-Full Circle

 

Morning.  Mordokai was actually waiting for her just outside Balen’s gates.  “I thought you would actually call the Temple down on me.” he said with a cold smile.

 

“And I thought you would have killed me when you had the chance.” Serpentine shot back.

 

Mordokai laughed.  “I’ll get my chance soon enough.”  He started down the road.  “Once this is over.”

 

Serpentine followed behind.  There were only two ways this could end, and she knew it, but this kind of opportunity would never come again.  At least, that’s what she kept telling herself.

 

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They traveled quickly through the Dead Queen’s former holdings.  Traveling was dangerous enough these days, but traveling in these lands was doubly so.  They never stopped for long, covering ground as quickly as possible to reach the fortress.

 

The fortress looked as if it had seen better days.  The years had begun to take their toll on the stone and masonry.  It looked almost abandoned, and yet here was where they would find their quarry.  The front gates were still open, the courtyard empty.  But as they walked down the abandoned courtyard, the keep doors opened, revealing someone standing in the doorway, sword in hand.  Blood dripped from ruined lips and cut skin, as if someone had cut his mouth into his head.

 

Which was exactly what had happened.  Serpentine recognized the man immediately.  “I knew I should’ve killed you…” she muttered as she drew her sword.

 

The man smiled.  His voice hissed as he spoke, the wind of his voice hissed through the cuts and tears of his new mouth, “My lord wants to see you, Mordokai, just inside.  The Justicar, though, will have to remain here.”

 

Mordokai didn’t say anything.  Leaving Serpentine behind, he walked through the large doors and into the keep.  The doors closed behind him, leaving Serpentine alone with the shadowdancer.

 

“I honestly didn’t think you’d have the steel to do that to yourself…” Serpentine said, readying herself, “Must’ve hurt quite a bit.”

 

The man only smiled, “Nothing compared to the pain I’m going to put you through…”  He vanished and reappeared right in front of Serpentine, his sword already in mid-swing.  Serpentine deflected the attack just in time and quickly stepped out of easy reach.

 

“I’ll be sure to kill you this time, Dark Moon,” Serpentine said grimly.

 

The man didn’t respond, only attacked again.  Each blow either struck air or steel as Serpentine defended herself.  All she needed was one opening to use her magic and this time the shadowdancer wouldn’t be getting back up.  She deflected another strike and returned the attack, cutting for her opponent’s thigh.  She was a hair too slow and the slash missed.  The counterstrike came at her head, just as she’d expected, she brought her blade up to deflect the incoming strike and planted a kick squarely in her opponent’s chest.  He stumbled backwards with a grunt of pain.  When she attempted to capitalize and stabbed for his heart the man sidestepped and smashed the pommel of his weapon into her back as she went by, making her stumble and fall to the ground.

 

The shadowdancer laughed again.  “I am going to kill you, Justicar, make no mistake.  The longer you fight me, the longer you only prolong the inevitable.”

 

Serpentine pushed herself back to her feet.  “If you could beat me, you would’ve done so the last time we met.”  She readied herself again.  “I’m not afraid of you.”

 

The shadowdancer smiled with his ruined mouth.  “That’ll change, Justicar.”

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            Ep 17 - Other, Chosen

 

            The keep was exactly as Mordokai had remembered it.  Time had only begun to decay the stone structure:  the pillars, walls, doors, everything was exactly like they’d left it.  The throne still sat on the far side of the main hall, and it was still occupied.

 

            “I knew you’d come eventually, Mordokai.” Dirk smiled from his spot on the Dead Queen’s former throne, “Back to where it all started…or rather, ended.  Isn’t that right?”  He stood up and started walking towards one of the pillars that stood in the main hall.  There was a fluidity to his movements, he moved like a snake.  He stopped in front of one of the pillars.  There was a gouge taken out of this one near the bottom, like someone had thrust a sword into it at one point.  “Here, wasn’t it?  You took DeCallo’s life and renounced your paladinhood right here…”

 

            “Her usefulness is done, as is yours…”

 

            Mordokai forced down the memory.  It wouldn’t do him any good here.  Four years ago he may have been used, betrayed, but now was different.  He’d tracked his way up the ladder of the Dark Moon, and it had led him here, now.  Now he would take his revenge.

 

            Dirk smiled.  “What were you thinking that time, hm?  When DeCallo lay there, bleeding to death?  Anger?  Hatred?  Did you want him to suffer?”

 

            Mi’ir turned his head and spat blood:  thick, crimson blood.  “End it, paladin, grant me the oblivion I seek…”

            Mordokai looked at Mi’ir, then the bloody sword in his hands.  Oblivion, the “reward” of the followers of the Dark Moon.  Killing Mi’ir would mean his ultimate end:  an eternal death.  Mordokai was a Redeemer, he was supposed to save the wicked from themselves, not send them to eternal nothingness.  In fact, it was his duty to keep that from happening.

            “Do it, paladin…”

 

            “All the while doing just about everything we wanted you to do…you very nearly single-handedly tipped the Balance in our favor that day…”

 

            Mordokai had heard enough.  He drew his sword.  “I didn’t come here to talk, Dark Moon…”

 

            “No, of course not…enough reminiscing…” Dirk retrieved his sword from beside the throne, “You came here to end the Order of the Dark Moon…foolishly thinking that I’m the leader…you haven’t even glimpsed the power my superiors hold, what they’re capable of, and once we finally tip the Balance that power will be free to be unleashed again…”

 

            Mordokai tightened his grip on his sword.  “Then I’ll just have to go after them next…”

 

            Dirk sneered.  “You’re a fool, paladin.  Even as an outcast you throw yourself at us, blindly fighting.  For what?  You could stand with us, side with those that would reward your acts!”

 

            Reward his actions?  For the past four years Mordokai had been an outcast, a pariah wherever he went.  He’d murdered, stole, and fought his way through that time.  The blood on his hands would permanently stain them red for the rest of time.  “I seek none of your rewards, Dark Moon, only your end.”

 

            “Then come and take it.”  There was an ominous hum in Dirk’s words that filled the air.  Light and dark seemed to play about his body, swirling around him.  It was a feeling Mordokai had felt only once before, many many years ago.

 

            “Paladin, there’s only one person I could ever say was definitely descended from the angels.”

 

            The energy surrounding Dirk, part of it was divine.  The man wasn’t human.  Mordokai shifted his stance:  fighters near and far, orcs, battles, but never had he actually faced one of the Others…one of those truly descended from the Higher Beings.

 

            …Mordokai’s quest for vengeance had just become a battle for survival.

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            Ep 18

 

            The shadowdancer blinked again, disappearing and reappearing just a few feet away from Serpentine.  She was expecting the attack, but it came from a different angle and she didn’t get out of the way fast enough.  The blade raked her hip, drawing blood.  She gritted her teeth against the jolt of pain and counterstruck at the shadowdancer’s wrist, but by the time she struck he was already gone out of reach.  The next attack came just as quickly, this time from behind.  Serpentine moved just quickly enough to avoid being speared.

 

            “You can’t hit what you can’t see, Justicar…” the shadowdancer mocked, “I could cut you to pieces like this.”

 

            Another blink, this time he appeared just to Serpentine’s side.  She cut for his head, but missed as the shadowdancer disappeared once again.  If she didn’t do something he was going to kill her eventually.  She needed a second to concentrate, but she wasn’t going to get it.  The shadowdancer kept attacking from various angles, places, Serpentine managed to stay alive, but only just.  She was amassing a large number of cuts along her arms and legs from where she hadn’t moved quite fast enough.

 

            The next attack came from her front, but Serpentine didn’t have enough time to block.  She dodged backwards, only to fall onto her back as the shadowdancer blinked away.  He returned almost right on top of her.  “I told you I would kill you, Justicar.”  He raised the sword to strike down.  Serpentine grabbed for his ankle, but the shadowdancer blinked away to her other side and drove the sword downwards…

 

            …only to drive it into the solid earth.  Serpentine had rolled further away and was now standing.  He tried to pull the sword from the earth but wasn’t fast enough.  He blinked just as Serpentine’s sword passed through where his neck would’ve been, leaving his sword stuck in the dirt.  He reappeared several feet away, but something was wrong.  He didn’t move, only stood.  A few moments passed in silence as Serpentine stood ready, but the shadowdancer never moved until the head slid from his shoulders and the body collapsed to the ground.  Without a second look, Serpentine ran into the keep.



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Ya know what I just realized?  I never put the finished product of the Dark Moon sequel up here.  So, for those of you that didn't catch it when I was cajoled into posting it in the Shipping Thread, I will post it here now.

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Ep 9-Mentors

 

High noon out on the plains was hot.  Obscenely hot, as Serpentine was finding out.  It wasn’t so much the actual heat that would get to a person, though Serpentine could remember days where it very much could, it was the lack of shade.  There were no real places to stop and catch a moment’s rest from the noonday sun.

 

Her stomach growled quietly, but she ignored it.  There were no guarantees that she would be able to find or catch any food out here, so what little she did have would have to last as long as possible.  Water she could find, water was easy, at least comparatively, but food was another matter entirely.

 

Serpentine stopped to wipe sweat from her forehead.  She hadn’t remembered the last time she’d made this trip being so difficult, or any of the times before that, actually, all the way back to the first time with Mi’ir, Celestine, and Mordokai.  It was like the turbulence of the times hung in the air, heating it up.  She looked back over her shoulder, half expecting to see her former captors bearing down on her.  There was nothing but the broad, silent plains.  But she wasn’t alone.

 

“You again?  You just seem to land yourself in all sorts of trouble these days, girl.”  Serpentine froze in mid-step and turned to face the voice.  The plains witch just waved, “Remember me?”

 

For a moment Serpentine couldn’t recognize the woman standing behind her.  The memory returned to her like a lifting fog.  “Koorli?”

 

The witch smiled knowingly.  “I told you that you wouldn’t go long without a teacher.  All grown up and a member of the Heraldic Order…my my my…”  She looked Serpentine up and down appraisingly.  “Seems I was right…as usual.  Strong indeed.”

 

“I had good teachers.” Serpentine said, eyeing the horizon nervously.

 

“You can relax, girl.  Mordokai can’t find you for now.”

 

“How’d you…” Serpentine stopped before finishing the question.

 

“There isn’t much that happens out here that I don’t know about.  I’ve seen everything the both of you have done since the Dead Queen’s fall.  He’s about a half-day behind you and riding his poor horse to death to catch up.  You’ve got yourself in quite the predicament.”  Koorli shook her head, brown hair swayed in the plains wind.  “Got yourself in deep this time, rather than just spectating.”  She sighed, “Come on, let’s get you inside.”

 

Serpentine followed Koorli, her last words ringing in her ears.  What had she gotten herself into?

 

Koorli’s cottage appeared from the hazy air as they walked.  “You’ll be the first bit of companionship short of Smudge in some time.  Helgraf’s doing…whatever it is Helgraf did for the past however long he’s been around.”  She opened the front door.  “Well don’t just stand there, come on.”

 

Serpentine spared one last look around before entering the cottage.  “What did you mean earlier?  What have I gotten myself into?  What’s Mordokai doing?”

 

Koorli reclined into a chair.  Her cat appeared from a shadowy corner to take her rightful place on her lap.  “He’s been killing his way up the ladder of the Dark Moon.  The DeCallo boy, DeCallo’s mentor in the Dark Moon before that, multiple low-level peons and their bosses…”

 

Serpentine sat cross-legged on the floor.  “But that’s not all, is it?

 

“You know the rest.  Every paladin sent to secretly apprehend him has never returned.  He killed them all.  While the Dark Moon is the current target of his anger, the Heraldic Order is next.  He needed you for his last move against the Dark Moon.  A bargain.”  Koorli started idly scratching her cat between her ears.  “He has a lead on the leader of the Dark Moon out here in the frontierlands.  This lead is willing to give Mordokai the information he’s been seeking for four years now, all he needs is a token.”

 

“A token?”  Serpentine was sure she knew what Koorli meant.

 

“A certain Justicar that had been causing trouble among bandits in the area.”  Koorli eyed Serpentine sardonically.  “Mordokai would’ve been proud, he had to kill a member of the Dark Moon to get their attention, all you had to do was break some bandit rings.”

 

Serpentine found she wasn’t wrong.  She knew that she’d gained the attention of the local crime lords, but she hadn’t expected it to bring Mordokai into this.  “Guess it comes with the job.”  She muttered to herself.  Her mind was already starting to form a plan.  She could use this information.

 

“That’s not a good idea, child.”  Koorli said absently, “It won’t end well.”

 

Serpentine started in surprise.  It was hard to get used to having someone be able to see into her head like that.  “What else can I do?  I can’t take both Mordokai and the Dark Moon on at the same time.”

 

“The enemy of my enemy isn’t my friend, child.  He‘s my enemy‘s enemy.”

 

“He’s Mordokai, Koorli.”

 

“In name only, child.  That man out there is Mordokai in name only.  He will kill you.”

 

Serpentine didn’t have an answer for that.  Mordokai was the enemy, that much was true, but he was still practical, maybe moreso now.  There had to be a way to reach him.  If not…

 

…well, she was a Justicar.  After the Dark Moon was dealt with, it would be Mordokai’s turn.

 

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Ep 10 - Powers That Be

 

Serpentine slept like the dead when night fell.  The knowledge that, for tonight at least, she was completely safe did wonders for sleeplessness.  Koorli, however, was still awake.  She ventured outside, into the night shadows.  “She may be older, but she’s certainly not any wiser” she said, apparently to no one.

 

A soft laugh rustled through the tall grass.  “Just because you can’t remember what it was like to be young and reckless…”

 

Koorli snorted.  “She’s going to get herself killed.  She has no idea what she’s meddling in.”

 

Another chuckle, “That’s kind of the idea.”  A silhouette appeared among the grass.  “If they knew how much hung in the balance, they’d never do it.”

 

Koorli sighed, it was just the way things were and had been for some time.  “The Balance…”

 

“The Balance.  Chaos and Order.  Helena and…”

 

“…Sahera.”  Koorli spat.

 

“…and Sahera, yes.  The Endless Feud.  The Balance.”

 

“So what happens now?  She’s already set on her path, I can tell.”

 

Koorli thought she saw a wry smile.  “You know I can’t tell you that,” her unseen partner said, “Part of the agreement.”

 

“You’re enjoying this, aren’t you?”

 

Koorli received no answer, her conversation partner had gone.  She looked up at the moonless night sky.  Sahera was ascendant tonight, the new moon, the Dark Moon.  Events were already catapulting towards a pre-planned confrontation.  One that would define the fate of the entire area, if not the entire frontier.

 

It was times like this that made Koorli regret becoming a Watcher.

 

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Ep 11-Bargain

 

Morning came and brought with it the new day.  Serpentine blinked sleepily and pushed herself to her feet.  She was no longer in the cottage, but rather outside underneath a small tree.  It was just like last time, only this time Koorli was waiting for her.

 

“He’s about a half an hour out.” Koorli said stoically, “I know better than to think I can convince you out of this damn fool plan of yours.  It isn’t going to end the way you think it will, or the way you hope it will, either.”

 

Perhaps it was the benefit of a full night’s rest, but Serpentine felt more of her courage and fire returning.  “I’m a Justicar, Koorli, hunting down people like the Dark Moon is my duty.  I‘m not afraid of them or Mordokai, for that matter.”

 

“Dress it up however you want, it’s still stupidity.  You’re bargaining with demons, you’ll be lucky if you escape with your hide intact.”

 

Serpentine brushed herself off and gathered up what little supplies she had.  “I’m not going to be a pawn in this game, Koorli.  I’ve been presented with an opportunity, and I intend to take it, risks and all.”  The Elders wouldn’t be happy with this decision, but then again they wouldn’t have allowed her to even think about taking on this kind of mission.

 

Koorli only shook her head.  “It’s your life to lose.”  The witch faded from vision and eventually was gone completely, leaving Serpentine alone.

 

Serpentine made her way back towards the road and waited.  Any moment now her former friend would be coming down that road, looking to recapture her to further his plans for bloody revenge.  It wasn’t long before she could see the plume of road dust rising from the ground as a lone horseman traveled quickly down the road.  Serpentine stood in plain view, arms crossed, waiting.  The rider stopped for a moment and the two stared at one another before the horse started slowly trotting up to meet her.

 

“I didn’t think I’d actually have you waiting for me,” Mordokai said coldly, “What’s it to be, then?  Are we going to have it out right here?  One-on-one combat?”  He dismounted, much to the apparent relief of the hard-ridden horse.  “Even with your shaping magics you know you can’t beat me.”

 

As he finished the last sentence, a small stone in the road suddenly exploded, startling him and scaring the horse into running away.  “The next time you think to challenge me, remember that I could do that to your head,” Serpentine said with an icy edge, “You caught me and my men off-guard last time and I underestimated you, I won’t do it again.”

 

Mordokai smiled.  The smile sent a shiver down Serpentine’s spine.  “Maybe someday you’ll get to find out if you’re right.”

 

“I know what you’re planning, Mordokai.”  Serpentine interrupted.

 

“Do you?  That’s hardly an accomplishment, considering I told you myself upon your first capture.  Of course, I hadn‘t known that the particular Justicar they wanted was actually you.

 

Serpentine didn’t blink, just kept on speaking.  “In as far as defeating the Dark Moon, our goals are the same, Mordokai.  Why not do this together?”

 

Mordokai laughed bitterly.  “Because I wouldn’t trust a dog of the Heraldic Order to watch over my armor, much less my back!  You have nothing to give me in this, nothing to bargain with!  The only thing agreeing to work with you would save me is a sweat from subduing you again…”

 

Serpentine lashed out and grabbed Mordokai by the wrist.  Just as quickly, Mordokai had her wrist in his free hand and was trying to crush her grappling arm.  “There’s no doubt you could crush my wrist…” Serpentine said through clenched teeth, “…but not before I’ve warped your arm past all usefulness.  Think carefully about your next move, Fallen, because in a matter of moments I could destroy all hope of you ever picking up a sword again.”

 

The two stood for a few moments, deadlocked.  Eventually Mordokai smiled and started laughing.  “Little Serpentine, all grown up…” he relaxed the pressure on her wrist, “Fine, we’ll do this your way, for now.  If only because it means I won’t have to fight you anymore.”

 

Serpentine let go of Mordokai‘s arm.  “Won’t have to fight me yet, you mean.”

 

Mordokai gave no answer, only smiled.

 

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Ep 12-Ruins

 

The duo spent the next few days traveling in silence.  Mordokai never stated where they were going, where this meet was supposed to take place.  But then, if Serpentine had known, she never would have let him take her there.

 

Four years of neglect had turned the buildings and roads of the abandoned village into ruins.  Scavengers had long since taken anything of value and the plains were already working on reclaiming the land the village was built on.  Even the charred remains of large funeral pyres had long since been lost to time, though Serpentine could still see them in her mind, just like she could see the village square, the remains of the villagers piled high, she could even see Mi’ir, though at the time her magic had turned the bard into Mira, and Mordokai sitting in front of the blazing pyres.

 

“Whomever your contact is, Mordokai, they’ve got a sick sense of humor in meeting here.”  Serpentine said, “They may as well have told you ‘we’re going to ambush and try to kill you.’”

 

“Meeting here was my idea.  No one comes here anymore.  The land is considered cursed.”  Mordokai answered.  He stepped out into the village center.  “I’ve arrived with my end of the bargain!  Show yourself!” he shouted into the ruin.

 

Four men seemed to materialize from whatever shadows they were hiding in.  Serpentine couldn’t help but be impressed, she never would have known they were there.  “So you have,” one of them said, “We were afraid you weren’t going to make it.”

 

“And yet here I am.”  Mordokai pushed Serpentine out in front of him, “Your troublesome Justicar.  Now tell me, who is the leader of the Dark Moon?”

 

The man in front of them snickered.  “It isn’t that easy.  We never said we wanted Justicar Serpentine alive.  Kill her, then we’ll talk.”

 

“That wasn’t part of our deal, shadowdancer” Mordokai growled.  Serpentine tensed and tried to watch the other three men.  They were outnumbered and surrounded, if this turned to violence, it would not be pretty.

 

“What?  Does she really mean that much to you?  Does the life of a single Justicar really matter to you?  Or are you afraid of her?”

 

“You would be wise to be afraid of me too, bandit!” Serpentine barked.  One of the other men suddenly disappeared, only to reappear right beside her.  Before she had time to react a knee to her stomach and another kick to the back of her legs had Serpentine kneeling.  A hand grabbed her hair and pulled her head back, baring her throat.

 

“There.  My man has already done most of the work.  Cut her throat and we’ll tell you everything you want to know.”

 

Mordokai didn’t hesitate.  Serpentine could hear his footsteps on the stone walking towards her, could see the glint of metal as the man holding her hair drew a knife and offered it to Mordokai.  When she tried to move her hands to grab her attackers arms, all she received was a brutal punch to the face for her efforts.  She couldn’t work any effective magic against him from her current situation, not without being able to touch him.

 

There was the press of the knife blade to her throat, then Mordokai’s voice:  “Ready?”


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Aug. 2nd, 2009

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Wow...Big Brother really is mind-numbing...a mere couple of minutes of it and I just completely blanked on what I was going to write...my god, it's even based on High School society!

...just...kill me now...

*punches self in face*

That's right...focus on the pain...

ok, there we go...

I have discovered that keeping up a steady pace on writing while trying to unpack a house and fixing the million little things that have come up in the past two weeks is damn hard, but keeping it up when trying to unpack a house and fixing the million little things that come up with a person that does not work well with others, let's say, is bloody impossible.  There was supposed to be progress on something other than Fallout 3 this weekend...

...fancy how that didn't work out.

But the good news is that there is progress, it's just slow.  I just need to get a draft, once I hit that step things should be a mite easier.  Though it seems like everything is conspiring to keep me from doing so (DR, I love you to death, but I swear if you complain about not having time to write when you've finished no less than 3 drafts I'm going to have to hurt you...)

Anyway, things are coming back together bit by bit.  It's almost a perfect situation, I'm almost finally through with Fallout 3, we have no money for new games (thank god, I've got no less than 3 and 1 expansion on my list...), so all I'm going to have to do is write.

...and clean the gutters, resurface the bathroom wall, paint the bedroom wall and dining room wall, unpack, weed the lawn...

god dammit!  happy post!  happy post!

The outline of the Fallout fic is currently being worked on (yay passive tense...), things are being written in my head, which is always a good sign.  Maybe have the first bit of it next weekend.  Decided that I'll put it up here since there's no point in keeping it for publishing as the odds of me ever getting tapped to actually write such a work (as if they'll ever do it) are virtually nil.

And, for some reason, this comes up, a piece of a story that I abandoned a long time ago (as in, this was a high school experiment):

     It was an old rope bridge, hastily built after the Change, over the river.  It was the perfect place for someone to stop and hold of their pursuers.  Only one person could cross at a time:  basic tactics.  Leon looked over his shoulder at the makeshift caravan making haste as fast as they could away from the river.  With any luck they'd make it to the city, but it would take a miracle for him to meet them there.
     Leon stood at the mouth of the bridge, waiting for the enemy to appear.  They'd been chasing him and his friends for some time now, never far behind.  They were led by one of the Changed, but that was all Scott would tell him.  Scott was one of the Changed too, one of the ones that remembered every past life, every experience, back to the First War.  It was something that Leon could never understand or be...

    ...and it made him expendable.

     The Changed's men were just starting to filter onto the riverbank.  He had to hold them back as long as he could, give Scott and the others as much time as possible.  He planted his spearbutt into the ground and waited.  It wouldn't be long now.

     Roan arrived to hear the sounds of battle and men dying.  His men, to be specific.  Some whelp of a fighter was standing on the far side of the bridge, he had already killed three of Roan's men and the others had been stalled, unwilling to attempt to move him.
     Cowards.
     Roan levelled his rifle and shot the fighter in the stomach.  Waste of a bullet, really, they were rare enough that using one to make an example out of an idiot was a real waste, but he couldn't wait or Scott would get away.  Roan strode across the bridge as the fighter bled his life out onto the dirt.  The fighter was still alive, which was the point.  He bent down to speak into the dying man's ear:  "I knew Zhang Fei, I fought Zhang Fei when he held the bridge against Cao Cao.  You, child, are no Zhang Fei."
     Maybe in his next life the child would be smarter.

Jul. 29th, 2009

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Yeah...so I said I was going to let this die...I lied.  I do that a lot, lie.  Ask anyone.  Except I tend to lie about lying so anyone might not be able to give you the right answer because I lied...

Don't know what exactly I'm going to use this for as of yet, I'll figure that out as I sporadically update from time to time.

For those of you that care, there will be a Fears 3 (damn you Mordokai...).  I've already announced the start date of Nov 9th in WW Central.

I'm slowly but surely getting back on the horse with regards to the book.  Did about 1000 words today and I'm going to try and keep that pace up at least every other day.

Picked up a new idea thanks to the Wasteland Challenge and the journal (1 2 3 4 5 6) that was part of it.  It's an Ironman challenge, so there won't be anymore of those updates.  Really only did it as a compromise between needed to do some writing and wanting to play Fallout 3, but when something sticks it sticks.  Maybe I'll just put that up here.  There's really no way to do it without it using the Fallout 'verse, so keeping it for publishing attempts seems kinda meaningless.  Might as well share it.



Apr. 30th, 2009

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It's become pretty plain for me to see that this thing isn't accomplishing what I had originally hoped.  Rather than being a place to maybe work out issues and problems with my writing, it's become something I only bother with when I think about it, and even then it's something of a chore.

It was an interesting experiment, but now it's over.  Time to shut this thing down.

Apr. 29th, 2009

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Yes, well, it seems its that time again...

...the first person that says "time to try to take over the world!" is getting shot.  I mean it.  The snipers are in position.

No, it's the time where I start searching for something, anything, that will light the proverbial fire under my lazy procrastinating ass to try and bring back the days where I actually could sit and bloody well write a couple hundred words, if not more, in a night.

It's not like I don't have reasons:  Sacha has turned into a voiceless, one note character that is completely overshadowed by Lukas, who has his own freaking fanboys already, questions still unanswered from the text that's currently written still haven't been answered, bridging that gap from "hey, there sure are a lot of murders happening" to "holy graham crackers with cheese!  you're a supernatural killing machine!" is still proving elusive, and the bloody novel keeps threatening to turn into some strange bastard child of Jacob's Ladder and Friends...

...you know, The One With All The Dying...

I suppose you could say that the real story lies in how these characters are reacting to what's going on, but that strikes me as not only disingenuous but also a quick ticket to having an agent say "Are you fucking kidding me?"

Let's face it, at the bare bones level, I'm writing this because I want to be published.  I want to see my name on a book on the shelves in a bookstore.  If the talentless hacks Meyer and Paolini can bloody well do it, then I should have absolutely no difficulty.

Of course, the reality is I'm going to have to scrape, crawl, beg, plead, bleed, and possibly even sacrifice a few cute fuzzy things to the Dark Elder Gods in order to even have an agent read this damn thing.  And I'm all out of cute fuzzies.

But goddammit if I don't want it.  What I lack is motivation.  Maybe I should just give up and move on to the other project:  turning Twilight into the parody is so clearly is.

Think about it:  Twilght + Interview with the Vampire + Mel Brooks...

"So..." I said, looking over at the stunning creature sitting across from me, "let's get the standard stuff out of the way first.  Sunlight.  Do you burst into flames?  Crumble to dust?"
The vampire shook his head sadly.  "No...it's much, much worse..."
This was confusing.  I mean, what could possibly be worse than bursting into flames if the sun touches your skin?  It struck me as even more odd since we'd arranged this meeting in the daytime.  "Worse?"
The vampire got up and opened the blinds, sunlight poured in through the window.  As the light touched his skin, he, and I shit you not, started to glitter and sparkle like a 70s disco ball.  "I fucking SPARKLE.  Do you have any idea how embarassing it is to go out on a cloudy day only to have the sun peek out and turn you into a walking glitter model?!"




Apr. 20th, 2009

a review of a different colour...

Did a movie review...figured I'd try a book one...who knows, maybe I'll be able to make a career out of it...

...or not...

...anyway...

...I'm getting to it...

...STOP RUSHING ME!...

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The Gun Seller - Hugh Laurie

First thing's first, yes, it's that Hugh Laurie, not a coincidence.  I only take time to point this out for two reasons:  first, it was the first thing that caught my eye, and second, anyone expecting the acerbic wit of Dr. House is going to be somewhat disappointed.  This book was written in 1996, when the most famous doctor on television was still being played by Dick Van Dyke, so House wasn't even a twinkle in the creator's eye.  Laurie's wit, however, is omnipresent.

The Gun Seller is a spy thriller, though it is more along the lines of a toned-down Get Smart than James Bond.  It follows the exploits of one Thomas Lang, a private investigator whom, we learn, was offered a substantial sum of money to kill a certain American businessman.  Lang refuses, and being the gentlemanly sort, goes to warn the target.  From there the plot thickens to include the CIA, Ministry of Defense, several women, arms dealers, and terrorists.

The book's humor is largely present in small side comments scattered constantly in the text, as most of the spy plot is actually played fairly straight (as far as spy thrillers go, anyway).  The book is told completely from Lang's point of view with a somewhat Harry Dresden-like quality, though most of the comments are less laugh-out-loud funny as they are subtly amusing.  The beginning of the book seems to contain most of these moments and they tend to dwindle as the plot goes on and becomes a bit more serious.  However, it's unlikely you will notice, as the overall plot is fairly engrossing on it's own.

The downside is that The Gun Seller has many of the earmarks of a first novel.  At some points the text is difficult to follow some of the and some scenes jump in a confusing manner.  It isn't that the text is sloppy in any way, it's more that the style can sometimes get in the way of the telling, particularly near the end.

As I said before, readers expecting the humor of House are probably going to be largely disappointed, but those familiar with Laurie's earlier work won't be.  The Gun Seller is engaging, humorous, and, to put it simply, downright good.  If you see it on the shelves somewhere pick it up and read through a few pages, you'll see what I mean.

Apr. 9th, 2009

ep 8

bah, too short.  But I can't bloody well think of anything else to put in.

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It was midmorning when Mordokai finally rode into Serene Valley.  The blasted healer had drugged him!  He didn’t have time to baby himself because of a little wound in his leg, he only had one shot at making this deal and it was rapidly escaping him thanks to the interference of that blasted Reinholdt…

           

…but that revenge would come later.  Right now Mordokai had to concentrate on the Dark Moon, and to do that he needed to recapture Serpentine.  If the villagers had followed his orders then that would be easy.  But from the way the Town Elder slinked out to meet him Mordokai could tell he wasn’t going to like what he was about to hear.

           

“Sir Mordokai…”

           

“She’s not here, is she?” Mordokai growled, let his displeasure show.

           

The Elder blanched visibly, he actually seemed to literally grow a full shade paler in his skin.  “N-no, Sir Mordokai.  She simply refused to listen when…”

           

Of course, these were mere farmers he was dealing with.  If he told them to keep someone in town, they would scrape and beg and cajole them.  “And you didn’t physically restrain her because…?”  Mordokai cut the Elder off.

           

“Sir?”

           

“Lock her in her damn room!  Tie her to the bloody stable fence!  Why didn’t you restrain her?”  Mordokai was beginning to wonder why he’d extended his protection to this mewling little pile of a village, and from the look on the Elder’s face, he could see that too.

           

“Sir Mordokai…we…”

           

“That’s enough, Elder.  I have protected this place for well over four years now, from the time I first set foot here.  That protection ends now.  I will not tolerate failure like this, especially now.”  Mordokai turned his horse to head back down the road.  Serpentine would head for Balen; it was the closest Heraldic Temple.  He would have to hurry to prevent her from reaching it.

           

“Sir Mordokai!”  The Elder beseeched behind him.  Without Mordokai’s formidable reputation to protect Serene Valley, it would likely be overrun within weeks unless the Heraldic Order stepped in:  which they would, of course…just too late to save anyone.  “Please reconsider!”

           

“I was made stronger by being abandoned by my benefactors.” Mordokai called back over his shoulder, “If you are lucky, so will you.”  He left the Elder standing in the square, watching his back as Mordokai led his horse away.  Serpentine would try to stick to the road, probably in the hopes that she would get picked up by a caravan.  Depending on how much supplies she had, she could make the trip in a week.  He would have to intercept her before then somehow.



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Apr. 4th, 2009

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...and here's part 2

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What had once been a city completely asleep just a day ago was now utterly filled with life and activity as the festival reached its peak.  Vendors hawked their wares in stands that filled the city streets, performers roamed the crowd, villagers from all across the Southlands gathered at the DeCallo keep in celebration.  From his spot on the raised stage Saben could pick out the various Kel’Hadim delegates talking up the different major Southland noble families.  He picked Menon out of the crowd easily, Menon raised a hand in greeting when he noticed Saben looking, Saben returned the gesture with a smile.  It was nearly time to rise to Menon’s challenge.  The band that was currently playing was nearly finished, then the stage would be his.

 

“Good luck” Saben heard Aramir say from behind him.

 

“It’s only a crowd larger than any the festival has ever had.” Saben said off-handedly, “Nothing to worry about.”

 

“You’re nervous.”

 

“I don’t get nervous.” Saben smirked.  The band was finished and were clearing off of the stage, letting his father on to gather the crowd’s attention.  “The show begins.”

 

Aramir chuckled and left, disappearing into the crowd as Lord DeCallo began to speak.  “Friends, family, and honored guests!  If I could have your attention!”  Slowly the crowd began to quiet and turn their attention to DeCallo.  “We have a special performer for the storytelling today!  I would like to give the stage over to my own son, Saben!”

 

Saben rolled his eyes, his father had no idea how to work a crowd.  He got up and stood by his father’s side as the rest of the crowd turned their attention to the stage.  “Now who has the impractical skills, father?” Saben whispered, sensing his father’s discomfort at being on stage.

 

            DeCallo only laughed.  “Good luck, Saben.”  He left the stage, leaving Saben to his task.

 

            Saben wasted no time.  “Over twenty years ago, Caliph Osman’s crusade against the Southlands was in full swing.  With his mighty armies, he had pushed is way past the southern border and as far north as Ah’Radim Lake.  Army after army had tried to stop him, but each and every one had come back defeated, their men losing all taste for warfare in the face of the fury of the Caliph’s warriors.”  Saben scanned the crowd, he had their full attention.  Menon stood out, a large amused smile on his face.  “Only one of the Southland families remained to face the Caliph, the DeCallo family.  Led by Lord Oren DeCallo and his own son Mattias, the DeCallo’s raised an army to face down the Caliph.  After months of brutal battles back and forth, the two armies finally met in a standoff at Ah’Radim Lake.  It was here that the final battle would be fought and the fate of the entire Southlands would be decided.”

           

The introduction completed, Saben launched into the full story:  the first skirmishes, the two armies testing each other, the leaders testing each other’s mettle.  The crowd hung on Saben’s words as he spun the tale, weaving the words together so that the crowd could see the battle for themselves:  the final charge of Oren DeCallo, the breaking of the Caliph’s lines, and finally the duel between Oren DeCallo and the Caliph himself.

           

“…his arm hanging useless at his side, the Caliph collapsed onto the ground, defeated.  He looked up at Oren, the man that had finally defeated him, but there was no malice in his gaze.  After months of fighting, after finally meeting the man in battle there on the shores of the lake, there could be no malice, only respect.  ‘If there was one man I were to lose to, it would be you’ the Caliph said, bowing his head, ‘Let it be done.’  Oren DeCallo, himself gravely wounded, limped forward and raised his sword high.  He hesitated for just a moment, almost unwilling to finally take the life of the warrior that he too had grown to respect.  But, to deny Caliph Osman a soldier’s death would be too great an insult, and in a single blow he brought Osman’s life to an end.  He had time for one last look at the battlefield, the Caliph’s warriors were in full retreat, he had accomplished what none in the Southlands thought possible, defeated Caliph Osman the Invincible, and there Lord Oren DeCallo’s wounds claimed his life as well.  His soldiers would find him later, lying beside his fellow warrior and respected adversary.

            Rather than move the bodies, Oren’s soldiers would bury him there on the shores of Ah’Radim Lake beside Caliph Osman.  The two greatest warriors of their time would rest side by side for all time.”

 

            Saben let the words trail off into silence, letting them wash over the crowd.  It was actually Menon that broke the silence first, applauding.  The applause soon spread through the crowd, drowning out any other sound.  Saben took his bow and made his way off of the stage, accepting the praise of those nearby as he went.

 

            Menon managed to find him as he made his way through the crowd.  “Your father’s boasts were not without merit, young Lord” Menon said, smiling broadly, “Thank you.  Your telling honors both of our families.”  He bowed his head.

 

            “Both our families?”  Saben asked, confused.

 

            Menon’s smile widened, “Did I not tell you?  Osman was my father.”  Menon waited for the look of surprise to fade from Saben’s face before breaking into laughter and clapping Saben on the shoulder, “I shall tell your father that he was right, you have indeed out-performed any of our bards!”

 

            It was Saben’s turn to bow his head.  “Thank you, Menon.  I’m glad I was able to give your father the honor he deserves.”  Out of the corner of his eye, he spotted Aramir waiting for him.  “I’m sure you have better things to do than sing my praises, friend.”

 

            Menon laughed.  “I will not detain you any further, young Lord.  I shall let someone else flatter you.”  Another pat on the shoulder and Menon was gone.

 

            “You don’t disappoint.” Aramir said, taking Saben by the hand, “I think you’ve probably got a regular job doing this, your father will never hire another bard ever again after that.”

 

            “Don’t say that!”  Saben protested, “You’ll give him ideas!”  He looked around at the crowd.  “Let’s get out of here, I’m exhausted.”

 

            “Your wish is my command.” Aramir smirked.

 

            They made their way through the crowd, Saben politely deflecting the invitations to join others as they made their way back to the keep, back to Saben’s suite.

 

            “Peace and quiet…” Saben muttered to himself.  The tale of Ah’Radim Lake was long, longer than any performance he usually did.  He slumped down into a nearby chair.  “Bloody hell if that story isn’t the longest one I know…”

 

            Aramir walked around behind Saben, placing both hands on Saben’s shoulders.  “Well you told it beautifully.”  He started working Saben’s shoulders.  “Even the Kel’Hadim were impressed.”

 

            Saben relaxed into Aramir’s attentions, working the knots out of his shoulders.  “Wish you could do that all night…”

 

            Aramir only chuckled and bent downwards to kiss Saben.  Their lips met while one of Aramir’s hands started tracking south…

 

            …and just as the door opened, revealing a very, very surprised Cass Brandine.  For a moment she only stood there, stammering something about making sure everything was in order in the room, but eventually her natural shyness took over and she fled from the room.  Saben cursed and made for the door, but Cass was already gone.  “Dammit!  Dammit dammit dammit!  I have to find her!  You need to leave, now.”

 

            Aramir seemed unsure.  “What can she do?  Most people don’t bother to…”

 

            “Maybe no one bothers you, Aramir, but it’s very different for me!  If she tells my father…or the Church…dammit!”  Saben punched the doorframe, he was already thinking of what his father’s rivals would do with this information, if they told any of the conservative members of the Church…

 

            …there wouldn’t be a thing anyone could do to help them.  The Church was separate from the courts; the Council had no real authority over them.  “We can’t stay here.”

 

            “Saben…”

 

            “Dammit Aramir this isn’t just a mere nuisance!  Just a little unfortunate incident that can simply be swept away!  We need to go now!”

 

            “Alright, let’s go then.”  Aramir started out the door with Saben close behind.  They made their way through the keep only to find the main doors blocked by members of the Church’s private guard.  Cass had done the single worst thing she could have, to tell the people of the village or Saben’s father would’ve simply meant disgrace, but to tell the Church put Saben and Aramir’s lives in danger.

 

            Saben didn’t even hear the proclamation of their arrest, barely remembered being led from the keep into the Church’s holding.  It was as if one moment he was standing in his family home, the next he was in a cell.  His life had apparently come apart just that quickly.

 

            “Saben…”  Saben looked up to see his father on the other side of the cell, looking at him.  “Saben, tell me this isn’t what it looks like.  Tell me the Brandine girl is imagining things.”

 

            No reason to deny it now…  “No, she saw what she saw.”

 

            “Dammit Saben you’re in real danger here!  Ever since Osman’s invasion the Church has real power now!  They can, and will, execute you!  If I had thirty years I wouldn’t be able to stop them!”  With the inability of the other Southland leaders to defeat Osman most people had turned to the Church for protection, and in order to keep the populace happy the Council had given the Church more and more power.  Luckily Osman was defeated before the Church was given the power of Inquisition, but the damage was still done.  “Saben, our people may be willing to turn a blind eye to this, but the other families, the other villages…”

 

            “Death for blasphemy?”

 

            “Saben…tell me that there’s something I can bring to the Church leaders.  He’s a magic user, tell me he bewitched you, tell me something!”

 

            “There’s nothing to tell.  If this were anyone else, no one would care.  There would be snickers and sidelong glances in the streets, but no one in our holdings would do a thing out of respect for our family’s stand against giving the Church so much power and our alliance with the Heraldic Order.  But Aramir was caught with me, and if he has to die for that then I’m not going to let him die alone just for having the misfortune of loving me.”  Saben turned his back to his father, unable to look at him.

 

            “For Helena’s sake, Saben!  I can’t help you if you won’t help yourself!”  Saben was shaken a bit by his father using the Lady of the Heraldic Order’s true name, it was considered a minor sin of disrespect.

 

            “If it gets the people to go against the Church, then I’m willing to die.”  Inside his head, Saben snorted.  That wasn’t what he felt, but it might help get his father out of this.  The truth was that there was no way to save the both of them, and Saben wouldn’t be able to live with himself if he saved his own skin while leaving Aramir to, quite literally, burn.  “Those other noble families owe their very lives to us, not the Church.”

 

            “Saben…” one last plea from his father.  Saben didn’t answer.  He heard the door open and close as his father left.  The only thing to do was wait for the priest to give him his sentence.

 

            --

 

            Hours passed before finally the cell door opened again.  One of the Church’s priests walked through the small door.  “Saben DeCallo, due to recent evidence delivered on your behalf…”

 

            Saben’s eyes widened.  He didn’t…

 

            “…the sentence of death has been reduced to the sentence of scourging, to be delivered immediately.”

 

            “What about Aramir?”  Saben demanded, “Tell me!”

 

            The priest’s impassive face never changed expression.  “He was executed two hours ago.  If not for your father’s testimony, you would have joined him.  Be thankful that the Church has granted you mercy.”  One of the Church guard came through the door, holding the scourge.  “You will remain here for three days afterwords, to both heal and ensure purification of your demons.”  The priest left as Saben’s sentence was executed.  If Saben’s pained screams affected the priest in any way, his face gave no indication.

 

--

 

            Eventually the pain subsided, the Church healers had attended to him with all the care they would an innocent.  Of course, by doctrine he was an innocent, at least he was now.  None of this helped anything but the physical pain, however.

 

            Aramir…I’m so sorry…

 

            Dead.  Aramir was dead, and not even because of barbaric Church doctrine.  Yes, that was what eventually killed him, but the true cause of Aramir’s death was Saben.  If it had been anyone else the news never would have met the ears of the Church, but Aramir had been caught with the eldest son of the DeCallo house, which meant the entire Southlands knew.

 

            Beside sadness, mixing in Saben’s stomach, was anger:  anger at the Southland families that had given the Church the power to do this, anger at the Church itself, and anger at the person that had taken Saben’s heart out, his father.  His father’s interference had ensured Aramir had died alone, just another blasphemer lacking the status and connections to save him.  Saben felt sick, even worse, he felt like a coward.  They should have at least died together.

 

            The cell door opened and closed, indicating a visitor.  Saben didn’t bother to roll over to face the newcomer.  He didn’t care who it was.  What could they offer him?

 

            “Tell me, young Lord, do you seek revenge?”  The familiar voice forced Saben off of the bed.  Standing in the center of the cell was Menon.  “Well?”

 

            Saben blinked in surprise.  What was Menon of all people doing here?  What was he talking about?  Revenge?  “What are you doing here?”

 

            Menon smiled.  “Offering you a way to right the wrongs committed against you, young Lord.”

 

            “How?”

 

            “By granting you a glimpse of your mother’s true legacy, young Lord.”  Menon held out a hand, palm up.  Tattooed on his palm was a mark, a mark that was only spoken about in whispers and through rumors:  the mark of the Order of the Dark Moon.  “All you have to do is take my hand and I can grant you a bit of our power.  It will not last long, but it will be enough to grant you the revenge you seek.”

 

            “But revenge isn’t what I’m after.”

 

            Menon’s smile never wavered.  “But why not?  Was not your lover’s death rendered meaningless by your father’s interference?  Would your lover’s death even have occurred at all if not for this wretched Church?  Take my hand, young Lord, and you can put right these wrongs.  Sorrow may sustain you for now, but it will wear off, and anger will replace it.  These people, they won’t help you when that happens, you have to do it yourself.”  He offered his outstretched hand.  “Take it, young Lord, you will not regret it.”

 

            Saben felt like there should be some type of major internal debate raging inside of him, but the truth was that there wasn’t.  Beneath the sorrow at Aramir’s death Saben could feel the anger burning hotter than he’d ever thought possible.  Menon was right.  Shedding sorrow, Saben stood and took the outstretched hand.

 

            The power was a trickle at first, but it soon opened up into a small flood.  Saben found his own meager magic greatly strengthened as the power rushed through him, granting him power he never thought he could ever attain.  “Now go, young Lord, and take your revenge.  The way is clear.”

 

            Saben stepped through the cell door and into the hallway.  Outside he could hear the sounds of violence.  When he reached the outside, he could see that the Church was under attack from rioters.

 

            “The villagers of your family’s holdings.  They didn’t react well when they heard the news of your arrest, I’m afraid.”  Menon said with a hint of amusement.  “Go!  The power granted you will not last very long!”

 

            Saben needed no second bidding.  He couldn’t take revenge on the whole of the Southlands, at least, not yet, and the Church was already under attack, so that left one last target, Lord Mattias DeCallo.

 

            --

 

            DeCallo closed the door to his chambers behind him.  He had spent the day trying in vain to put down the riots that threatened the nearby Church holding, but the people refused to be budged.  In a way it was heartening, the show of support for his son, but in the end this would only put back his efforts to weaken the Church substantially.

 

            “Forgive me, Saben…” he muttered to himself.  Thanks to his efforts his son would live, even though it was against Saben’s wishes.

 

            “No.”

 

            DeCallo turned on his heel at the sound of Saben’s voice.  “Saben?”

 

            An eerie deep blue glow lit up the dark corner of the room, revealing Saben standing there, waiting for DeCallo to return.  “No, I will not forgive you.”

 

            “Saben…”

 

            “You should have let me die, father…but you just couldn’t let go.”  Saben started walking from the corner of the room.  “Instead you made me a coward, you made Aramir die alone!”

 

            DeCallo was confused.  “Saben, please, we can talk about this.”

 

            Saben’s hands started to shine with a magical light.  “No, we can’t.  I’m through talking, father.  Vengeance is what I’m after now…”

 

            “Vengeance?  Saben, I saved your life!”  DeCallo almost shouted.

 

            “And then you took my heart and crushed it in the palm of your hand!” Saben roared back.  “I was willing to die beside Aramir!  Instead you took that from me!  You let him die alone just so you wouldn’t have to face your son’s death!”

 

            “How could I let my own son die?!  I had to do something!”

 

            Saben raised his hands.  “Tell that to Aramir when you see him.”

 

            In that moment, DeCallo could see that he was going to die.  In Saben’s eyes was that same fire that had occasionally burned in his wife’s eyes, so long ago.  That cold hate, anger, pain, Saben had, as he’d feared, succumbed to his mother’s legacy.  “At least let me die as a warrior.” DeCallo said, reaching for the Southlands scimitar he kept on the wall.

 

            “I’d rather kill you like a dog.”  Light jumped from Saben’s hands and pierced DeCallo’s body, pinning him to the wall and slowly draining the life out of him.  Calmly Saben took the scimitar and left the keep, leaving his father to die as the magic slowly drained him.

 

            --

 

            The power left Saben just as he escaped into the wilderness.  He hadn’t been seen by anyone, at least not as far as he knew, but that didn’t matter.  Once it was discovered that he was missing the other Southland nobles would brand him a murderer out of sheer convenience.  It would be the most expedient solution to restore order as they began their play for a piece of the DeCallo holdings.

 

            “Now you see.” Menon’s voice said from somewhere in the shadows, “This is what we can offer you.”

 

            Saben stopped.  He felt…good.  “What do I have to do?”

 

            “Your intent is clear, young Lord, simply accept the offer and you will become one of us, an initiate in the Order of the Dark Moon.  This will be just a taste of the power to come.”

 

            “Then I accept your offer!” Saben shouted into the shadows, “Let these lands burn!”  He felt almost giddy.  Sorrow and pain was burned away, leaving only a void.  “Saben DeCallo is dead.”  He whispered into the darkness.

 

            Menon stepped from the shadows.  “You will need a new name then, young Lord.”

 

            “Mi’ir.  So I never forget what caused all this.  So I never forget what was taken from me.”

 

            Menon smiled one last time.  “Come then, Mi’ir, there is much to learn.”



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